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Work in progress part 2

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Besides drawing a few buildings I added a lot of thick black lines. I'm not sure whether it was a good idea. On the one hand it looks now more "interesting" is a combination thin like a spider web line and thick strokes. But I did a lot of mistakes in this sketch that are now even more visible.  I'm going to end up it anyway. Then add a bit of watercolor paints. Probably I'll draw it again, on the mistakes, I can learn a lot.

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Poza narysowaniem kilku budynków dodałam też sporo grubych czarnych linii. Nie jestem pewna czy był to dobry pomysł. Z jednej strony wygląda to teraz bardziej "interesująco" to zestawienie cieniutkich jak pajęczyna linii i grubych maźnięć. Ale zrobiłam przy szkicu sporo błędów które teraz jeszcze bardziej widać. Tak czy siak mam zamiar skończyć szkic w tym stylu a później dodać nieco koloru farbami akwarelowymi. Prawdopodobnie narysuję to jeszcze raz, na błędach też można się sporo nauczyć.
Image size
2194x2011px 2.88 MB
Make
Sony Ericsson
Model
LT18i
Shutter Speed
1/100 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Sep 29, 2014, 12:24:47 AM
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JeremiasGotthelf's avatar
Before im giong to tell you what could be done better, I have to assure you, that this is really good work that I dont want to criticize.

It seems that the buildings left to the church ar unstable. Its like they were about to crash, cause the lines arent exactly straight.

That was it. Again, fantastic work, so dont take it personally ;)